This report aims to present what is popular with teenagers in Indonesia. It could be their lifestyles, their music, movies, public transportation, and the other things. But, I just concerned with two topics, it is public transportation and cultures of Indonesia. I interviewed 14 friends of my classmate, and here's the result.
Public Transportation:
As you know, Indonesia, especially Jakarta has many public transportation. It's look like the other country, same like taxi, airplane, etc. But mine is not so cool like foreign country. We have busway, taxi, bajaj, bus, and the others. Most of my friends prefer busway to be their public transportation. It is comfortable and cheap, but often we got on the news that many people on busway lost their money. Busway also full of people, and have a long queues. The place of queues is not comfortable, it is hot and full of people.
What about the other transportation? Taxi also the popular public transportation. It is comfortable, but it is expensive. And the others like bajaj and bus, there must be renovated. It is cheap but it is not feasible anymore, and they are not follow the rules, so they always make traffic jam.Cultures:
Indonesia is so rich of their cultures, every provinces, tribes has their own cultures and it makes Indonesia full of diverse cultures. The majority of people said the traditional dance, like saman, must be kept by us. The way can be like joining the school club, extraculicullar, etc. of traditional dance and study about them. And the others said the cultures like wayang, batik, traditional song, and music must be conserved too. But some people also said that we must keep every cultures that we have. How to keep them? They said we should tell our children, grandchildren, etc. about the cultures and we must respect our cultures, not underestimate it.
It is surprised when most of people prefer public transportation that is expensive than the cheap one, they just prefer the comfortable of it. Also they want to keep traditional dance, especially saman dance, and they said the way to keep them too.
-Andi Adelia Putri S. XB/05
Your report is pretty good.The format is correct.It has a clear topic sentence and controlling idea.The general structure of your report is good because it consists of introduction,findings and conclusion.But,you need to fix some grammar in your report.For example,you wrote "must be renovation" above.After "be" you should put a verb 3 not noun.You need to recheck this report and fix the mistakes.
BalasHapusOverall,your report is very good.It's easy for
me to read and understand your report.
Ravenska Marintan Nania XB-33(Group 7)